According to the article reported by Euromonitor international (2011), the growth in
developing countries are slowly catching up due to the rapid economic growth. I disagree that these developing countries have greater potential than developed
countries,
According
to statistics that Euromonitor provide, it is definitely true that these developing
countries are catching up. However, there is definitely doubt in the
sustainability of these claims displayed by the statistics. There are many
different contributing factors when it comes to the measurement of a country’s
economic growth. The statistics provided serves as a platform to come out with
a hypothesis but it is still not a definite indicator to depict the overall
picture of the situation. It is definitely true that the broadband diffusion
rates in developing countries has been growing relatively fast as compared to
developed countries. In addition, this might not be representative as a whole
country.
Base on
information obtain from Nanjing marketing group (2011), out of the total internet
users in china, only 27.3% come from rural areas while majority of china’s
users come from urban areas. This statistic starts questioning to whether the
growth would hit a ceiling as internet penetration to urban areas is so much
higher than those in rural areas. This also bring the question that would
internet continue to grow in rural areas with the limitations of IT infrastructure foundations in
those areas. The Chinese government has been channeling its resources to urban cities
such as shanghai and Beijing to continue to spur economic growth towards china’s
journey of becoming an economical power in the world, the question is, would the Chinese government
source some of its resources to rural areas? They probably would not do so in the short run. This would happen but then it
definitely would take quite some time to take shape as the basic foundation of
building a modernized city is not as easy as it seems, it requires quite a large amount of money, planning and also time.
This brings me to the point of the contribution of wealth. According to BBC News (2014), the higher end to the social class of China, people are becoming wealthier as time goes by and is spending more money, but it still does not prove that the wealth is being distribute fairly as the rich is becoming richer while the poor is not becoming richer or even worse, they are declining in wealth. This applies to people especially in the rural areas. This shows that statistics are just a consensus of the whole country on average and not a true representative. This then conclude that things cannot be seen in such a way that is assume that everyone is equally affluent.
This brings me to the point of the contribution of wealth. According to BBC News (2014), the higher end to the social class of China, people are becoming wealthier as time goes by and is spending more money, but it still does not prove that the wealth is being distribute fairly as the rich is becoming richer while the poor is not becoming richer or even worse, they are declining in wealth. This applies to people especially in the rural areas. This shows that statistics are just a consensus of the whole country on average and not a true representative. This then conclude that things cannot be seen in such a way that is assume that everyone is equally affluent.
In
addition to the point mention previously, there are also a number of
contributing factors in determining a country growth in terms of the digital
divide. An economy might be hit by certain uncontrollable factors such as
financial crisis, natural disasters and political instability. Financial woes
might cause currency crisis, for example the Great
Depression, which was preceded in many countries by bank runs and
stock market crashes. This would then result in the downfall of an economy and
indirectly it would also affect the digital divide when there is less absolute resources
to distribute and channel amongst the different industries in a country. Natural disasters such as the Japanese
tsunami can bring down the economy overnight, where resources are being channel to do recovery work. While political instability, such as the protests in Thailand can deter investors to invest in the country. These factors are examples that
the economic sustainability in the long run would not be definite and cannot be controlled or accurately hypothesis by the sole use of statistics.
References:
Euromonitor
International. (2011, February 2). Global digital divide persists but is
narrowing. Retrieved August 25, 2014, from http://blog.euromonitor.com/2011/02/global-digital-divide-persists-but-is-narrowing-1.html
BBC news.
(2014, Feb 2) Affluence of Chinese is growing. Retrieved September 6, 2014, http://www.bbc.com/capital/story/20140203-the-rise-of-chinas-wealth-dragon
Nanjing
marketing. (2011, Oct 28). China rural urban internet usage. Retrieved September
6, 2014, http://www.nanjingmarketinggroup.com/blog/rural-chinese-internet-usage-2011_10_27
Hi Louis,
ReplyDeleteTo start with, the summary could include more key ideas
The thesis/stand could be clearer by taking a more firm stand on the issue. You can include any counterarguments in your essay later
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